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Monday, 13 February 2012

Peer assessment of flat plan and ideas

Peer Feedback - My magazine is up to a standard of which is good, apart from the front cover. The contents page is  simple but still looks professional which is good. the double page spread is easy to understand and the whole page for a image just makes the reading that much better.


Improvements - The main improvements that I need to make is on my front cover, i have completely changed it as it was a difficult genre to do. It probably wouldn't look professional enough so i decided to change it to a modern style with blues and whites. Simplicity is the key so it is easier to understand and read.

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